In this country they are some people stared using drugs, alcohol, smoke. The parents are worried that their kids used drugs, alcohol, and smoke. When the boys and girls have their separated parents or have problem of parents they enter the gangue and stared drugging them self and even drinking and smoking to take out there pains and there bad memories.
When the people drink they forget their children even there family. And then they stared looses everything what they have. When people smoke forget everything and some people have cancer when smokers. The drugs are very bad for the young, Latin American drugs consumed by hunger and children are minors, and to not feel the cold and avoid the problems they have with their families
When people use smoke, drugs, drink they enter a program to forget about the things what they did. However are some people are go to the program because they donít want to see their sons and daughters do not be suffer alot.But there people donít other people to in their lives because they think that they could live the drugs,smoking,drinking so fast.
When people smoke they could get cancer or they could die. When people drink they could be in the hospital or they could be addigitive.When they used drugs they could die or they could be in coma. But the must thing is that many people want that people want is that they want to cured for does things they donít want them does things because they want to have a go life and future.
Many people donít want anything to happen to the other person and even children they want to cure from does stuffed. Because they donít want the children do the same people using drugs, alcohol, smoke they want to be so cured not see them by smoking, drugs, alcohol?
Monday, December 3, 2007
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introduction & conclusion is a 2 because you have some mistakes and u need to explain more ur main idea or thesis
main points: 2 because she need more to explain and have to change her topic in each main ponits.
Organization: 2 because she has the three main points but she need to work it out on her spellin explaining her main idea or (thesis)
work cited: 2 because she need to more improvement on her explonation....
MECHANICS: 2 need more improvement in spelling
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